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Escort girl "it's my job"

Posted May 2nd, 2008 by 14FIONA

Your paying my fee's
So down on my knee's

Kneeling in the dirt
giving a good flirt.

You have the power
but it's all so sour.

I wanna shout
but instead i pout.

I have to do it for my kid
so i have to keep my lid.

Afterwards i go
with a bit of a slow

My princess is in bed
At least now i know she'll be fed

:)

On May 2nd, 2008 SensualInk says:

Its so sad how this happens. I hate the idea of it all but you did very well at expressing the thoughts of someone that doesn't think they have a choice. I like the last two lines, gave me a sad but vivid image.

~Sensual Ink~

thanks

On May 2nd, 2008 14FIONA says:

it's sad to think about but sadly it happens so i wrote this.

Well written

On May 2nd, 2008 andrew1 says:

A well written poem, thought provoking.
Andrew

Strong Piece

On May 3rd, 2008 David Gibbs says:

I like this a lot, well written piece on a difficult subject, good work,
Dave

thanks

On May 6th, 2008 14FIONA says:

thanks for your comments i appreciate them

fiona

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