show girl

curvacious crystal
wrapped in silk.

red lace trimming,
proud body singing

pink feathers flaunt
her delicate blue basque.

silk stockings are tied,
time to make them die

feathers so soft,
breasts are pushed aloft

hands applaude the air
as the women prepares to share.

nakedness has no fear
as the show begins near.

Hi Fiona

This was a fairly engaging write and moved at a reasonable pace. The fact that it was primarily fluff does not demand detailed critique.

Honestly yours,

Pete

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