This is who i am
I am the dark side of you.
I'm full of sin,
i'm the darkness that lies within
No priest can pray me to heaven.
I've never felt sorry for anything.
No healing hand can
wash all this disgrace.
I should suffocate
with my guilt.
I feel nothing.
I am the frost that
freezes your match,
But this is who i am.
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dark, emotionless, and quite brilliant
reminds me of a time in high school when one of my very religious friends was toying (very frequently might I add) with the idea that i was the devil. I never denied it.
but i also like the aspect of the first line. "I am the dark side of you." i don't know if you are talking to yourself, a person, or just at life in general. it is the most confusing and the most intriguing part.
no need to explain what your thinking was.
keep writing.
thanks
hahah i liked the fact you never denied that your a devil and thanks for your comments. I think this is my favourite poem i have wrote.
fiona