heavens is where we do all want to go and its beauty is uncomprehendable to us. this was a sweet write and welcome to the site.....keep on posting! ;)

I like this, honestly. Though, let me shed some light on your situation. Light as I call it, darkness as you call it. From reading all your poems--oh yes, I have read them all---I feel it that you are a newly wed. If this is true, then all I say to you is from the tounge of one who has loved everything beautiful and let it all die away before me. In the biginning, love is pefect,but in the end, love becomes a dream. Heven, as you call it, seems all perfect, but, after you go through this thing called life, you will begin to hate everything that the word "Heaven" means. I am sorry to be the one to tell you this. All I can say is go through what life has in store for you, and then--only then--do I ask you to write something new. For all of this is in my blood. I knew it all along.
For all it's worth...