Moments I Can Never Take Back

in the center
rage
devastation
in the center
i am the tempest
in the teapot

this storm swirls
out of control
this storm demands
chaos wrapped in
the sorrow of those i love

crash
with heavy thunder
feel the deafening sound
of burnt hopes crashing
in the center

in the center of me

emotions...

I really liked this poem-- the words you used were beautiful... alot of emotion in this one, good job!

Thanks

Thanks.
This was inspired by a painting one of my best friends painted.

"God is a comedian playing to an audience too afraid to laugh."- Voltaire

i like the way its written.

i like the way its written. especially thoes lines with just 1 word. it has this emphasis and mean a whole lot more.

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