World So Cold

painted faces depict the fear
figurines frozen in ghastly poses
shadow of doom covers all
death without dying
earthly souls bound to whispers of fate
life without living

world so cold

broken angels nailed to the cross of time
men of valor bent to beastly form
shadow of doom covers all
vision without seeing
dream machines churning futures hate
words without speaking

world so cold

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Hmm....

You know I don't know. I would rather watch a comedy than a horror.

Oh, and thank you.

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Yeah, but they are full of BS!

Those are the ass-clowns that just don't "get it" nor will they ever.

Nope, just a little marketing.

You are a good craftsman, I

You are a good craftsman, I love the expression "broken angels nailed to the cross of time" - a vivid image crafted with words. I love your style.

Thank you CEPHAS.

Thank you CEPHAS.

i liked the broken angels

i liked the broken angels line, and the overall tone of darkness. i also really like your word choice, very nice :]

Hey

Thanks.

"earthly souls bound to

"earthly souls bound to whispers of fate"..loved this line...

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