My Pain

Weaknesses.
Thunder to the sun.
Fire to the water.
Black to the white.
Clouds to the sky.

A flower snowed on.
You can stop the snow.
To tall.
You can stop growing.
Drenched.
You can stop the rain.
My fault.

Dying.
Crying.
No control.

Opinions appreciated.

Opinions appreciated.

My Pain

Interesting read, portrays an image of little self belief, self esteem, self confidence.
Quite a dark write and personal. That's how it seems to me anyway. Interesting piece.
Dave

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