The First Dream

These words are fewer,
but more sweet,
maybe each one reaches closer,
to the divine,
where the light of one world,
shines a thousand,
where every human desire,
has no meaning,
and the first dream,
whispered the answers,
to a question of love .
Do you know how it feels,
for a heart to be alive with dreams again,
and the silent waves are not of this world,
but of the next,
of dreams that angels dreamt before this one,
show me that heart of yearning,
and i would show you,
the sacred knowledge of creation.

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That was really beautifull!
wInTeR rOsE

Thanks for your view winter

Thanks for your view winter rose,i like your name.
all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.

I see

Magic comes from those spontanious, unexplained, wonderful moments,
where the best of memories form,
for in each of the those moments,
A speck of magic flares from the music of your laughter,
and the lightness of your smile,
to gather into the world,
for people such as you to create poetry with.
Thank you, by the way. That was a very meaningful and kind mini-poem. I like your name, too...I'm just not exactly sure what it's supposed to be...____starwatcher??
wInTeR rOsE

Touching words, a heartfelt

Touching words, a heartfelt thanks again for your reply.{all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.}

oldaspirationsneverdie...7 Ju

oldaspirationsneverdie...7

Just can't come up with the words to describe the sincere beauty
that are contained within this piece of magic, but I'll try: The orginality
just glistens like the first beauty of a Christmas day! Thanks for sharing
this piece with your audience!
Please stop by to review one of my poems!

aspirations im very grateful

aspirations im very grateful for your view.... God Bless you all.
~all the magic of this world
dwells within you
an eternity of years
and its all you ever needed to know~

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