The lost Dreams
Show me the land,
where angels dwell,
where your beauty dances,
in the lights of the other stars,
swirlling with mists of the aurora,
and these moons send tides of hues,
violet silver sapphire and the unknown drifting singing,
my eyes fall upon the wishing sea,
the mystic bringer of lost dreams, where indigo jewels flutter amongst,
the ebb and flow,
everything is like this.
Love can open eden's for us,
where the lost dreams,
of the first innocence,
of many worlds,
could be found,
surely you must
believe,
before the sun dies,
and the fading embers return,
to the dust of the earth,
flowering innocence weeps,
tears of joy,
another day another life.
- adialstarwatcher's blog
- Login or register to post comments
The Lost Dreams
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
I really like your descriptive language. Your word choices are unique!
This piece has a very stylish flow giving the reader much delight!
Enjoyed these lines of verse, "flowering innocence weeps/ tears of joy,"/.
My goodness
You made music with those words. Absolutely wonderful. My favorite line was: "Love can open eden's for us." That was sweet!
wInTeR rOsE
thanks winter rose ,
thanks winter rose , oldaspirations,im very glad you all enjoyed it. {all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.}
Enjoyable
How gracefully you write. A beautiful poem.
Deborah
Thank you deborah for
Thank you deborah for reading and commenting this one. {all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.}
Sound and imagery
This is lovely, from the sound of your words to the images they conjure. My favorite line is this: "my eyes fall upon the wishing sea, the mystic bringer of lost dreams, where indigo jewels flutter amongst, the ebb and flow"
thank you dmkraft,thanks for
thank you dmkraft,thanks for you view.
all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know.
Your poem...
oldaspirationsneverdie...7
Your word choices give this poem its radient imagery
gifting the reader with beauty! I just want to thank
you for sharing this wonderful poem full of vivid descriptions!
many heartfelt thanks
many heartfelt thanks aspirations...you have commented on many of my poems and im very happy for that. ~all the magic of this world
dwells within you
an eternity of years
and its all you ever needed to know~
well done
this poem was really loaded with exciting and unique language. it was a pleasure to read. my favorite lines; "the ebb and flow/
everything is like this."
jka
thanks...with a warm
thanks...with a warm smile..jka
~all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know~
Mystical vortex
I love "swirling with mists of the aurora" - spiritual imagery from a mystical vortex!
Smiles and Light
AuraGem
just wonderful...you enjoyed
just wonderful...you enjoyed my write!
~all the magic of this world,
dwells within you,
an eternity of years,
and its all you ever needed to know~