A lost love

Heart beating faster…faster
Nothing …nothing our nervous laughter
Freedom…freedom a beautiful disaster
Laughing...laughing a loving heart overflows
Step pause step
Rewind fast forward
Breathe one breath
Hand in hand
Heart to heart
Loving you…a work of art
Blink one blink
Speak one word
Hear one thing one thing heard
Moving forward moving back
Holding tightly to the past
Must let go must hold on
Must be right is it wrong
Leaving shortly staying near
A heart beats slowly hear its fear
Loving…loving with a prayer
Living…living do we dare?
Thinking…thinking forbidden thoughts
Wishing…wishing a wish now caught
Frozen…frozen within chains
Dancing…dancing in the rain
Singing…singing a lovers heart
A story tragic…torn apart
Cruelty…cruelty a haters heart
The devils work of art
Tearing…tearing all around
Screaming…screaming at the sound
Crying…crying a lost love
Begging…begging for their love
Pleading…pleading it’s not enough
missing...missing what is lost
innocence broken at a cost
whats ripped away from innocent hands
will be returned and felt again
but a haters heart will do the time
for they have commited the devils crime
crying begging pleading for mercy
but noone will hear you for you showed no mercy
weaker...weaker you will grow
sooner or later you will know
listen...listen hear what's lost
Silent…silence…a lost love…
Insanity...insanity i told you innocence..had a cost
sanity...sanity innocence for sanity you've now returned what was lost...

Nice Work

I like how this piece began, really strong and with a definate rythm to it.

Debs

thanks !

yeah it was so funny because iv been in a chipper mood and then i wrote this like i dunno haha just seems funny for some reason. At first it started out nice and happy and i was going to stop but then i chose to put a twist on it and i dunno i like it^^ but its that much better when others like my writing as well so thanks=D.It was also an unsual format for me so yeah im really glad ya like it=].

~katie aka pirate and so forth

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