messed up

somemany things that u said were untrue,

but lieing is just something you enjoy to do.

no matter the pain in yours eyes its some sort of gain,

do u really think life is a simple game?

yes i am aware that sometimes life is not fair,

but why live life trying ur best to make it unfair?

why lie and say u care,

why talk about them as if theyre not there.

if u want fake freinds who only lie to ur face and stab u in the back then go ahead,

but im gonna choose real true freinds instead.

so do what u want go ahead try to ruin my life,

but im not the one who will end up alone at one point in life.

i dont act my way through life unlike u,

to my freinds i try to be true.

i choose not to be a follower to not do whatever popular opion asks of me,

i am not blind i see what a real life can be.

drugs,drinking,cheating and deseaving how can u say that without that ur not living?

to me thats life but ur blind to the reality that someday u will wake up someday u will realize that u f***** up! haha have fun while i live my life with the freinds i have left have fun with the fakes who havnt stabed u yet.

The world is not out to get you

I feel you are mistaken. People might screw up, but, 9 times out of 10, they have the best intentions. How can you judge whether or not someone cares about you? People are too diverse for that. When worst comes to worst, even if I have deceived, acted, and (unintentionally) hurt others, I can say my life was REAL and I was REAL, and that I did my very best to maintain whatever I consider to be moral, helpful, and true.

I know

yes your absolutly right...but i wrote this in a bad state of mind and well i had know the person for a few years and we were very close but you are right and i know the world is not out to get me thank you for the critisism=]

We Have Met

I only commented because I *know* you. Well, I might not know *you*, personally. But, I do know someone who must have been your twin in another life. People are much better than their pain.

you do?

haha really? hmm thats kool=] and yeah your right.

You're a girl? Hopefully you

You're a girl? Hopefully you are, 'cause, otherwise, I'm truly freaked out by this.

yes i am a girl?

haha yes i am why?

Creepy...

The person I know who is like you is a guy. I seriously did think you were him, before I left comments (and some of the poetry is about females, though that could still have been him incognito LoL). The similarity in ideas and structure of the poetry is absolutely uncanny! That's why I got so perturbed at some of what you have written - I can view myself as being the person that occasionally causes others grief. But I don't see it as a game, and I certainly don't do it for fun.

That is creepy...

haha that is weird... haha i understand but thats what makes you different because some people do do it for those reasons and others don't it really does depend on the way they are. ya know?

I agree

I know what you mean. Some people know they are hurting others, and it doesn't seem to bother them at all - they'll use, abuse, and do whatever else they want, with no remorse or thought about how the other person might be feeling.

exactly

thats exactly what i meant, and the person i wrote this for is like that...So yeah haha thats why its extremely negative towards him and such.

I know

yes your absolutly right...but i wrote this in a bad state of mind and well i had know the person for a few years and we were very close but you are right and i know the world is not out to get me thank you for the critisism=]

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