Missing you

Missing you-

One step One word,

The sweetest i've ever heard.

One breathe One wink,

No hesitation No need to think.

Nothings missing but everythings gone,

Missing you can't possibly be wrong.

So cold So weak,

Alone i seek.

Searching for what isn't lost seems foolish this i know,

But then again how do you miss someone who never seems to go.

Your here but there,

Your everywhere.

My heart overflows with the joy of your everlasting presence...

Yet still i miss you ...Oh how i miss you so...

How do you miss what isn't gone?

How can you punish what isn't wrong?

all in the same,

these questions remain unanswerd this flame untamed.

for who are we to say what is here and what is gone,

for who are we to say what is right and what is wrong.

Regardless of this...

i miss you...oh how i miss you so...

I Am Drawn

by this, though i dont know why. You say so much here and it is said in a passionate way.

I like the questioning of things, and pondering of things in this. 'For who are we to say...'
I really like that, and the ending line aswell.

Is your name Adam by the way? Theres so many letters going on! lol

Deborah

Im very glad

that your drawn to this peice. It is indeed a very passionate peice and i tryed to portray the emotion of missing someone or perhaps something. haha my names kaitlin tho hahaha. but im really glad ya liked this peice i wrote it for someone i truely care about because we have this deep connection which to say the least is deeper then words can describe but its funny how much you can miss someone but never really feel the seperation from them im not sure if that makes much sence to you haha but i hope it does. thanks for the comment!=D
~katie

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