mistaken
There she goes again…another mistake,
But this time it’s left a permanent stain.
She wishes she prays to undo what she’s done,
She begs the song of mistakes had been left unsung...
Nothings ever broken beyond repair,
As long as there’s someone left who cares.
She’s broken...empty and scared,
Remembering every moment they shared…
She trys to run but is stuck motionless within fear,
She screams soundlessly…she sheds a silent tear…
Crying… feeling abandoned …alone…
Searching…for some shelter from her tears for a home…
A forgotten hand reaches out and helps her up,
Her eyes are opened her heart filled with love.
He wipes her tears of fear away and prays to god everyday,
Two souls once broken, empty, and cold….
Become whole, strong, and bold…
Together they are undefeated and strong,
Alone they are broken and wrong.
She fall’s to her knee’s overwhelmed with happiness,
No longer do tears of fear fall but tears of joy stream from her happy eyes a sight meant to be seen by the hopeless…by the loveless…
Nothings ever broken beyond repair for he’s the proof that someone always cares…
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Incomplete?
So, no matter what, you always need someone to complete you? If you can't be happy on your own, you're never TRULY happy with someone else. Sure, you might trick yourself into thinking this other person can create happiness for you, but it's a sad lie that isn't worth living.
no
no but i wrote this for someone who's going through a difficult time and so it's written to and for her. no you don't always need someone to complete you but it helps alot to have someone there for you to help you im not saying you have to but she does have someone to help her through and so thats how i wrote this for her..
I Liked What You Had To Say Here
And regardless of whether i agree with it or not, i found it quite a moving read. There was so much being spoken of by the writer and a introverted observerance upon one's life. Though there is also hope and a yearning within this piece. They are seeking something, though almost in a dreamy way.
I like the formatt aswell, which is unusual for me, my style is very different. I think It works well within this piece.
Deborah
Thank you
im glad you enjoyed it, i wrote this for my freind who has gone through alot and come a long way so it means alot when people enjoy my writing and find it moving because thats usually my goal when i write. thanks again!