the song of the broken hearted
INTRO:
Running-(girl)
(Break me)-(guy)
Screaming-(guy)
(Break me)-(girl)
Reaching-(girl)
(Break me)-(guy)
Dieing-(guy)
(Break me)-(girl)
Nothing-(girl)
(Break me)-(guy)
Crying-(guy)
(Break me)-(girl)
Bleeding-(girl)
(Break me)-(guy)
Begging-(guy)
(Break me free)-(both sing)
verse one:
Your eyes are empty
cold with dispare
your locked away
but you don't care.
standing in the distance
no sight nor sound
chained down to the ground
broken hopes broken dreams
your lies and truths tied together tearing at the seams.
Chorus:
"Voics screaming,
Where do you hide?
praying kneeling,
will you be caught in the tide?
crashing pulling,
desperate eyes cry.
hopeing bleeding,
hopes fountain runs dry."
Verse two:
Your drowing within the sea of hopelessness yet dieing of thirst,
singing the song of the broken hearted unrehearst.
helping hands reaching for you but you refruse to pretend,
how can someone so broken ever truely mend?
a lovers eyes o so blind causing all this pain,
alone you stand tears falling down surrounded by the rain.(chorus rp 2x)
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An Acoustic Song?
I could really see this song played on acoustic guitars with a little bit of drums. Have you listened to Jess Strantz? I think you would like her.
Good piece
---the purpose of life is a life of purpose
i love
Acoustic pieces. I love them because there so raw and pure well most of the time anyway haha. no i cant say iv heard of her but i'll surely look into her music. im really glad ya liked this peice what i think is funny about this one is the fact that i woke up in the middle of the night and just had the words to write as if my dreams or someone had placed them into my mind which happens to me constantly. I rather enjoyed writing this one its not the happiest song but in real life sometimes happy endings dont happen so why wright songs and poems that always have happy endings? someone has to let the world that not everything that happens in movies(all the happy endings) always happens in real life. i love writing this way and i cant wait to make it into a song and record it, im currently saving up for a mic so i can sing it and eventually ill be good enough on my acoustic to play notes along with it. it may take a while but it'll be very much worth the efforts. thanks again^^!
Katie aka pirate and so forth..