Within the rubble

Within the rubble:

I thought I was a gonner,

A suicidal bomber…

Not caring what was lost,

Not caring the lives he cost.

chorus:

"As screaming echoes through the clouds of dust,

The tears are falling as the murderer's lust.

Reaching for a helping hand,

No strength is left they cannot stand."

The rubble lies in silence pain and hatred falls,

A child cries true tears as his mother calls.

A father and a lover broken down and burned,

Lost within the rubble a punishment unearned.

chorus:

"As screaming echoes through the clouds of dust,

The tears are falling as the murderer's lust.

Reaching for a helping hand,

No strength is left they cannot stand."

I really Like..

This heaps! I can almost hear this song, this poem, which is actually quite rare when your read something which has lyrics. I love the beggining and the chorus. Do you play an instrument? Me-guitar.

Just wonderful!

Debs

aww thanks!

yeah i sang it as i wrote it... i dont play an instrument well enough yet but im working on the piano and the quitar. once i save enough money up for a mic im going to record it with my angel hehe and it should be quite lovly^^.
Katie aka pirate and so forth..

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