Deathbed Discourse

This past week I lost two good friends. The one friend I lost to cancer. The poor guy suffered horribly. All through his ordeal his wife was by his bedside. I began to reflect on this and I tried to put myself in his place. What would I say? What would I think knowing I was about to die? Shortly after musing, I composed this sonnet.

Weep no tears for me at this time and place.
A thousand eyes change not my destiny.
All living things must die eventually
Except my love for you, which I embrace.
Feel not sad for me looking at my face
Although it's old and wrinkled you can see
A budding rose should age so gracefully.
My time grows near my love, in any case
Your life goes on nevertheless my love.
So wipe those eyes dry of life's mournful dew
And think not this time undeserving of.
Life had been kind, more so, finding you.
A lifelong companion envied above
By angels and cherubs alike. Adieu!

oh...how sad, sorry for ur friends death...

it's nice he had love before he went, and its nice you put urself in his shoes and thought about the reality of life...the poem was sweet but sad and I like what u say in it.....If I were to say anything on my deathbed, it would be repentance and begging and praying for mercy....I think I would most likely blank out to anyone and everything at that time, but I hope I get a chance to say my good bye's at least to my family......peace

Repentance

I too would probably repent for past transgressions if I were guilty of committing them, but it would be a mental repenting; something personal between my god and me. It would serve no purpose to involve others in my confessional, especially by onlookers at deaths bedside.

oh but ofcourse....

repentance is something shared only by the sinner and his/her Lord....God even says,...cover up ur past and sins for if you cover I shall cover but if u reveal someones sins, God shall reveal u...the only benefit onlookers would gain is a serious wake up call, that life really is short....peace

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