Love will find a way

We have been together a couple of years,
You’ve helped me overcome my fears.
When I’ve been led astray,
You are there to find the way.
I hear your beautiful voice,
It makes me want to rejoice.
Whatever the weather, snow or frost,
Without you there I’d be lost.
When I’m angry and uptight,
You remain calm, always polite.
I desperately want us to be together,
As I love you now, more than ever,
This is causing me serious frustration,
As you’re stuck in my Satellite Navigation.

nice one Andrew

what a lovely poem a great write with feeling, hope you both together in the end from Willow

I'm Not Sure..

If this is a serious piece or not...but the ending line made me roar with laughter! Thankyou for that Andrew it made my day!

Though if it be true...whoops! sorry! and a beautiful poem all the same!

DEbs :.)

so serious until the last line! lol

I was really into your deep love poem until you socked it to me with the last line! I love that, andrew. very, very good work - keep it up!

joyce

Thanks to you all

Thank you for reading and your comments.
Andrew

FAN

I had no idea someone could write with so much passion about someone they love, especially a boy. You have a great writting ability and should keep the poetry comming......

Best wishes,
Kayla.

Thank you Kayla

Thanks Kayla, I'm grateful for your comments.
Andrew

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