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Smile

Posted May 7th, 2008 by andrew1

Take this thought away,
As you go about your day.
Make a person smile,
It will make it more worthwhile,
Bringing joy along the way.

I`m smiling Andrew

On May 8th, 2008 willow says:

good poem Andrew it`s got me smiling yes a smile does bring joy to a person great Tanka from Willow

Thanks Willow

On May 8th, 2008 andrew1 says:

Thankyou Willow, I'm not sure if this is how Tanka should be written, as I have never written one before, I think I might ask Joyce, if she would be kind enough to have a look.
Andrew

I dont know either lol

On May 8th, 2008 willow says:

I dont know either Andrew but looks pretty good to me from Willow

yes, andrew

On May 9th, 2008 joyce says:

you're on your way! Your second is more fun and that is why it attracted more attention. I find the same thing with mine! The funny ones seem to be the most popular - it's not always easy to write funny though!

Thanks again

On May 9th, 2008 andrew1 says:

Thanks again Joyce, I really do appreciate you taking the time.
Andrew

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