The Game
Creeping up behind his prey
In a very stealth like way
Pulling out a knife
He takes another life
Another man is dead
Blood pours from his head
Increasing his number of kills
It’s how he gets his thrills
He hasn’t any shame
He’s only playing a computer game
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good one Andrew
a good poem Andrew and so true to life ,a lot of these computer games are so life like and they do give kids ideas I think, a good subject for your poem very well written from Willow
Thanks Willow
My son was off school today, due to the teacher strikes, and was playing games on his computer, which gave me the idea, thanks for your comment.
Andrew
oh yes, I remember it well!
great job, andrew. Kids are so caught up in these things they don't even know what they're doing. My son is not a kid anymore but he still enjoys those games - he thinks I'm a prude for not thinking much of the violence. I'd rather be old school on that issue!
joyce
Grand Theft Auto!
Great computer gangster style game-Husband is now on level 5 (final level!)... Blimey those things are addictive!!
'Kills and thrills', that just about sums it up!!
Loved the twist at the end, it had me going there for a while!
DEbs :.)
Thanks
Thankyou to you both.
Andrew