The echo of thunder

I'm dissapearing
Like a falling star's wake
Memories fadding
Like reflections off the break
My cold heart fell through the night

A light house tower
Against the abysmal sea
Watching the stars
Life watches me
Slowly Distinguish from site

The echo of thunder
Against a ship's bows
Death's sunder
The stormy wind howls
For what might...

nicely written;-)

nice use of personificetion. =D
liked the last line cuz it left me wondering as to what was going to happen and eager to read more... (its a sign of a great writer)
thnx for sharing
snuggly bug .x.x.

Comment viewing options

Select your preferred way to display the comments and click "Save settings" to activate your changes.