Beneath The Midnight Oak

Beneath the canopy
of the old great oak.
My head tilts awkwardly
towards the sky,
as midnight walks
ever so slowly towards us.

Elder statesman of the back yard,
seat in which the wise owl
quietly works over
his silent wisdom.
Your leafless arms stretched out
before the vastness of the night.

Moving shyly in your presence,
the moon hides her face,
in a cloak of clouds.
Orions twirling, nightly dance,
seems to spark,
brushing against the ends
of your black boney fingers.

interesting

I like how you portrayed the tree as a person or being. raskin

Thanks

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, feel free to comment on any and all of my poems. Good or bad remarks are welcome,I could stand to learn a few new tricks.
Thanks again,
BAE

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