One Life Shattered
Fuming in my solitude, with nowhere left to turn.
My insides heating up, my heart begins to burn.
The small glass box in which I live just shatters to the ground.
I lie there bleeding, suffering, and no one hears a sound.
The world just keeps spinning and I pray that it will end.
The mask I wear falls to the ground. Why bother to pretend?
A candle flickers next to me. I stare at it with doubt,
And with my one last gasping breath, decide to blow it out.
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beautiful phrasing, and imagery...
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This would make a great song, it's very lyrical as I read the
heart, hope in your words, hope your candle will find it's eternal flame of love...
Wow. That is a powerful
Wow. That is a powerful poem. Very well put together, excellent flow, good rhymes. Very impressive. I wish you the best, and hope you find some strength in your life. I'll pray for you tonight, because I know what it's like to feel this way.
Douglas K.