Angel (call and response)
Angel (part 1) by: Michelle Self
My little Angel,
She used to fly so high
But those boys they grabbed her down
So she no longer roams the sky.
I tried to take care of her
And mend her broken wing,
But for now her spirit is broken
And no longer will she sing.
Only she can fix this.
Only she can make herself well.
And this is the story
Of the day my angel fell.
-Michelle Self
Angel (reply) by: me
Laying down her head to sleep
Upon her companion's breast
She embraced her every sorrow
And laid her hope to rest.
The hurt was like a canker
Her wings broken like her heart
And though dawn was quick approaching
There was no faith in this new start.
But pushed by love and wisdom
Her companion seeked to quell
All of her angel's misery
So she could make her well.
And off she pushed her from her ledge
Into the morning sky
And fueled by her companion's love for her
She found the strength to fly.
Away away away from her
The angel sings her praise
And though often they are parted
She will love her all her days.
-Lauren
p.s. Gosh I suck at rhyming! Oh well, I tried so that's all that really matters, right? Well this was a call and response poem between my best friend and I. I tell her all of my problems and then she tries to cheer me up. This was just written today by the way. ^^ So brand new just for you. But poo, it's rhyming and I can't rhyme well…. But whatever. My second rhyming poem ever!
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