Best friend, Worst friend
Elaine smiled with me very widely
She shared a lunch at a party
Would flatter me every time we met
We together went to the greatest fetes
I received a gift for my birthday
Will check for a house call when I'm away
An invitation at Christmas time
Gave me best wishes, we went and lime
For Carnival we jumped in a band
We held on to each others hands
No one did ever like Emily
A disrespect to her family
I hate a lot of obscene words
Will quarrel like a turkey bird
In rage and drinking all the time
An alcoholic,that,the sign
She dresses up in a nude way
Not true to her husband she will get pay
Making a confusion by a club
After that you'll see a mob
Elaine left me when I fell down
She pretended she heard no sound
A woman came and showed she care
She called for help she was sincere
There was a hand who was holding me
While on a bed it was Emily
She once stripped for my handsome man
Still she held on to my weak hands
Forgiveness is what she asked for
I forgave Emil, I thanked her more
Elaine she wasn't there
To show how much she really care
Emily stayed till i recover
Emily is my friend forever
'Your best friend can be your worst enemy!''
'your worst enemy can be your best friend!'
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Brenda
You have committed the cardinal sin of poems with a rhyme scheme. You stretched real far and wide to force some of the rhymes. When this is done in a piece it makes the reading and enjoying of it very difficult for the reader. Using rhyme is a very tricky thing and I feel that you have some work ahead of you when it comes to perfecting its use.
Pete