If JESUS did appear

If JESUS did appear tell me what you think I' do
I'll be shocked, I will say 'I wasn't expecting YOU
I wouldn't even make the time to go and comb my hair
I think that I might feel just a little bit of fear.
I'll stick to one spot while some joy would come to me
That is because it will be the greatest thing I'd see!
I would feel like a baby while I kneel down on the land
I'll slowly lift up high , my trembling happy hands
I'd be curious for I wouldn't know what would he say to me?
I'd be forgiven of my sins,I'' cry I'll be in glee
It will be beautiful, I'd feel at peace I'd feel so light
Imagine just to experience this magnificent sight
I'll feel cradled when he says that my sins are forgiven
I'll have no doubt for I know that I would be in heaven
When he is gone my eyes will gleam just like a bright diamond
The quietness of JESUS,when he leaves there is no sound
I would not forget that sight if JESUS did appear
I would be really happy for that shows HE really care

RE: If JESUS did appear

An enjoyable piece; liked the subject matter and approach; nicely done. One suggestion is this: Instead of If Jesus...", consider "When Jesus..."; your title implies uncertainty in Christ's ultimate return. --Joe B.

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably. --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

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