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Dual Identity

Posted September 2nd, 2008 by brighttack

Dual Identity

You are a thief,
Tou are an angel too,
The proof I possess is,
You have stolen my heart.

brighttack

hey this is beautiful

On September 2nd, 2008 mimi says:

hey this is beautiful

Thank you

On September 3rd, 2008 brighttack says:

mimi for you kind comment your work is a bit special my friend
Take Care
brighttack

this is great

On September 2nd, 2008 raskin says:

I like how you wrote this, simple, the duality of love. raskin

Thankyou

On September 3rd, 2008 brighttack says:

Hi raskin anything I write is simple my friend it has to be to go with my character. Thankyou for taking time out to comment. I appreciate it

Take care

brighttack

another great one

On September 11th, 2008 willow says:

Loved this one also short but says it all brilliantly hugs from Willow

Willow

On September 11th, 2008 brighttack says:

Thank you Willow. I wonder if you have ever suffered from writers block? I did badly once and these few lines cured it so they have a place in my heart.
There is a saying "Little apples taste sweet"

Take Care
brighttack

yes brighttack

On September 11th, 2008 willow says:

I have suffered from writers block and I looked out of my window at `My Old Garden Shed` and wrote a poem about me clearing it out,lol and that cured me I know what you mean,hugs from Willow.

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