Solitaire
SOLITAIRE
It was the early spring,
I saw you for the first time,
My pulses raced anew,
As you flowered like a summer rose,
Your attraction was the strangest thing,
It was fought but not defeated,
You became my private Solitaire,
A single enigma I cannot fathom,
Whilst the roses bloomed and faded,
Your beauty kept my mind in disarray,
Captivating winsome smile,
Flashing seductive eyes,
Is a secret message contained within?,
They shine as two freshwater pearls,
Glistening in a virgin shallow stream,
One wrong move, touch and all is gone,
So my lovely Solitaire,
A complex puzzle you remain,
I fail to analyze the pieces,
You are Aphrodite in my turmoiled mind,
A Goddess a million light years away,
Will you ever descend to my earth?,
Where I an trapped in vortex visions of fantasy joy,
Thinking singular thoughts of you.
brighttack
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wow
this is a beauty..i am surprised it has not garnered more comments
Thankyou
Hi mimi thank you for your comment. You know poetry is an individual opinion thing and it could be folks don't like this one BUT I like it my friend so there are two of us agreed.
Take care
brighttack
beautiful
this was beautiful you do write such lovely words David,this was beautiful from start to finish hugs from Wilow
Hi Willow
Thank you for comments I do appreciate them. coming from such a fine poet as yourself they are truly valuable to me.
Take Care
brighttack
this is a good write
strong words... they move...
write on
clairejane
Thank you
clairejane for your comments Write on? you kno I think I may
Take care
brighttack
This is so beautiful. I LOVE
This is so beautiful. I LOVE "One wrong move, touch and all is gone" How true!
I love how you write.
Linda
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Ah
Young Linda I thank you and I am glad you enjoy some of the poems
Take Care
brighttack