oldaspirationsneverdie...7

Your poem was really about a soured relationship, as you have,
or the character in your poem has tried to tell a friend: "to leave
her "loser"! On a more universal level I think it's nice you
included some thoughts, as a friend "I'll lend an ear!"
You did include: "Nex time, you need to lend me your
ears/ That way you will have nothing to fear"! A few
more lines of that nature I think would enhance
an already good poem.... !

(Would you drop by my site to review a poem or two of mine? I thank
you for sharing this write with your audience!)