Aisleway of the Sun
Ocean bells up-toll amidst the slow descending light
Snowy Egrets waver with the coming of the night
Dusk proclaims it's eminence and paints the evening red
The moon so calmly waits it's turn, to claim the skies ahead
In a changing of the guard and switching of the hour
The orange king so gracefully bows. His crown, so lightly showers...
With golden rays soft-flickering, another day is done
As peaceful sails malinger down the aisleway of the sun
- Bryce E Coast's blog
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Beautiful Piece
Bryce,
This was a beautiful description of sunset and it had a genuine calming effect to it. In line five you might want to check your spelling of the word guard.
Your buddy,
Pete
Thanks Again Petie
I was in a hurry this morning writing these shorts, but i'm glad that you caught that typo and reported it the the principal's office friend~~B.E.Coast
Wow!
This is beautiful! Nice work Bryce.
DEbs :.)
Debs:.)
I'm so very appreciative to have your blessings~~B.E.Coast