On Her Property
Venturing far, into this land
Upon her property
Over and under, as I scan
So brash and naughtily
Into crevasses, far deep
Tempted, as I wander
Over curves and rounded peaks
Treading here and yonder
Touching, what I dare to touch
Undaunted in my route
Passing warning signs and such
Eating, forbidden fruit
Going where I want to go
Within this wonderland
Into brooks and smooth plateau
And through the meadowlands
She's left the swing doors open wide
For me to limber in
Beckoning to come inside
Into her shop of sin
Now, overtop the picket fence
She's spread her arms asunder
Ever-calm and never tense
She's left me free to wander
Feeling shifts reverberate
So subtle and so brief
Hearing moans conglomerate
Soft quivers.. like a leaf
Through the contours of her suite
And in the tulip garden
Through the gift shop, so discrete
No need to beg for pardon
Like a most unruly buck
Who drinks from placid streams
Simmering, just like a truck
With over-heated steam
- Bryce E Coast's blog
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brilliant poem Bryce
this was so interesting to read a good sensual poem well written and a joy to read from Willow
Very clever
A very clever poem, liked the way this was written, took me a couple of reads to see where you were coming from (bit slow today, late night out drinking last night)
but when I did, I really enjoyed it, liked the "Over curves and rounded peaks" line.
Good work.
Andrew
really good
loved how you ended it. raskin
Thanks 2 All..
I chose to tiptoe around on this one-with the wording. Didn't want to get 2 hardcore with the imaging(the young faithful), but as long as everyone got it's all that matters~B.E.Coast
Bryce,
I love the way you wrote this.
Leaving it to our imagination was so very sensual...nice for a change.
THIS is the way women like to hear it........
PHEW.....
Linda