Killer Wabbits
Into the woods
I take a stroll
Out to the Meadow
With Nicole
And here and there
We see these holes
Just everywhere
By brooks and knolls
And out from them
Pops out these eyes
They're bloodshot red
And large in size
I look at her
She looks at me
We freeze in fear
She starts to pee
And suddenly
We're not alone
Our little stroll
Is now postponed
O, were we scared?
A little bit
Surrounded by
KILLER WABBITS!
They stood about
Oh....five feet tall
Yes, they were huge
Surely, not small
Their floppy ears
Fell to the ground
Their massive girth
Was so profound
Can see we have
Disturbed their feast
They still had blood
Streaked on their teeth
"Eek!" shrieked Nicole
"What shall we do?!"
"I'm scared to death"
"Don't know bout you?!"
"We stand our ground!",
I sharply said
"And throw these stones,
Straight at their heads"
But this just seemed
To make them mad
They start to drool
O... just to add
We stand, embraced
As they approach
A little more
Approach, approach
Closing the space
We can't see through
Closer, we brace
To be continued...
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Kill the wabbit ...
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
"Be very very quite, I'm hunting wabbits"
go here to listen :)
http://www.wiseacre-gardens.com/sound/elmer002.wav
Not this time though..
Yeah, but this time the wabbits get big and evil , and hunt us now
-B.E.Coast
Very Funny
Had a good laugh at this! Very well written, great piece!
Dave
Cute!
I like the evil giant rabbit twist. Reminded me of the old cartoons when they drank the potion and the sweet little character became big and evil.
Peace & Blessings!
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haha
This is a great poem! Enjoyable and funny. Thanks for sharing!
Walk in truth...
--YoungPoet