Lightbugs
Speckling the baseball field, they glow
In greenish-yellow light
Blinking in circuit,
Up they flow
On a cool midsummer's night
Hours after innings' end
And stands have all but emptied
I sit and watch
As they ascend
In swarming droves, they impede
Lost in the spectrum, I behold
One flutters up my nose
Glowing there
So bright and bold
Much struggling, to dispose
- Bryce E Coast's blog
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Hey Blowhard
Bryce,
That's what I would reccomend for dislodging the little bugger. I love the way this piece progressed giving little indication that there would be a funny pay-off.
Pete
Oh, You bet I did Pete ..))
It was lodged in there for a good while my friend... my nose was glowing like Rudolph's ((blinking in short intervals)). When It finally came out it was alive, but thoroughly covered in snot (sorry for the ruining your dinner)~~ B.E.Coast
Well, that's good to know
Bryce,
Everybody has boogars in their nose but only you could have a bugger. Good to hear you dislodged it.
Have you had much chance to read many of my pieces?
Pete
Yes I have..
I don't stay online for long much these days, but when I do get a chance I'll try to leave more comments my friend, you REALLY have a way with words. I can honestly say you have inspired me to make more of an effort to try and comment more when i get the oppurtunities~~B.E.Coast
Nice one Bryce
thanks for the laugh Bryce I enjoyed the read `tis good to be back hugs from Willow
Thankyou Willow
'Tis good and very dandy to have you back my friend, i sorely missed your comments~~B.E.Coast
Hi Bryce
thankyou for your kind words now I am back have a lot to make up for, hugs from Willow
ah chooooo!
poor little bug, didn't know what he was getting into! Glad he made it out alive even if a little dirty. They are beautiful, and I thought your description was right on. Then you turned it into a humorous tale. Excellent job!
joyce
bless you!
yes Joyce, they blink all over the place in the evenings here, very beautiful to look at, but some unlucky ones lose their way unfortunately~thanks~B.E.Coast
Its got everything,beautiful
Its got everything,beautiful description...humour,enjoyed this piece.
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thankyou Mimi for stopping in, very much appreciated~stay classy my friend~B.E.Coast