*PEARL*

Untainted orb
Devoid of strife
Now open, to the world

Inducted
To a brand-new life
The day, your eyes unfurled

Unchambered
From your outer-shell
And now, you're free to dream

So distant..
From the stars, you fell
Into this gallant stream

You can not know
Sincerely so
Just how your love, elates

It wasn't so
That long ago
I called through heaven's gates

And from the sea
You came to me
A new, abundant treasure

The tears, ran free
I looked to thee
With overjoying pleasure

A renaissance
A baby girl
That healed my heart's bereave

A new respons'
A shiny pearl
That caused me to believe

Very pretty, thanks

Very pretty, thanks

clyde...

Thanks -b.e.coast

Excellent

Best one of the day by far! It flows so well. Beautiful images. Steeped in emotion. Anyone reading this has got to feel a
warm glow inside. Well done!

poetmaster...

Thankyou Very Much For Your Enthusiastic Words Of Appraisal ^ _ ^ Bryce

This is beautiful ,Bryce

This is beautiful ,Bryce

Mi^ _^Mi

YOU are BEAUTIFUL.. my friend ~B.E.Coast

Pearl..

The arrival of new life, bringing with it, all of its hopes, joys and promise into the world, our world.
I really like some of the words you have used here 'unchambered' stands out amongst them, and 'caused me to believe'

Excellent work Bryce and one to contemplate on time over.

DEbs

debs..you're the best

I Always Appreciate Your Insight ~B.E.Coast

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