Tattoed Soulz
Tattoed soulz, laden with stories
Stories of life's long inventories
Everything that you've gone through
From here to there, from old to new
Tattoed soulz, paged like a book
Column by column, stories unhook
Knowing the places you have gone
Etching the feelings you have drawn
Tattoed soulz, yes, you and me
Penning our whole biography
The pains, the joys, the wins and loss
Letter by letter, forming across
Tattoed soulz, authored by thee
Whatever the case, on there it will be
Right from the moment you were born
The typing starts, and words adorn
Tattoed soul, inked-out in blue
With every poem, I hue from you
Yes, everyone, from old to new
With every day that I've gone through
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Beautifully..
Romantic! I loved the way you have written this piece Bryce, and it just flows so well. Every line here seems to express something and i love the lines 'Right from the moment.....words adorn'
The only thing that appeared slightly out of a place, was the word-'Soulz' But thats, just me and something i picked up on, and does not take away from your write. This is one of my favourite pieces of yours, so far.
Debs
Thanks Alot...
Thanks again for the comments guys it's much appreciated.. Yes, Debs, I purposely misspelled "Soulz" just to catch eyes.. I'll sometimes do that in my poems not by mistake. Spelling words right all the time can get boring (lolz), so I just to try to change it up and look more awkward.. I like being awkward and unoriginal sometimes
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Yeah
I know what you mean, i guessed you'd done it for a reason. Just my critical eye going into over drive for a brief second there! lol
God yeah! It would be boring if we all wrote the same way, and also if we never experimented with words.
Debs :.)
Awesome!
Beautiful piece so true!
Vic