Lost
In Autumn's trance
the chilling air,
the weight of a loving stare
The colors dance
among the trees
though, some..already bare
Lost, I am still there
Lost in a long pleasing
kiss...
An Unforgettable romance
within our midst
Lost in a dance
among the stars
or, it seemed that it was so
Lost in the words
"I'll lay you down
in a bed of leaves"
Lost in the thought
of jealous trees
wishing they too
were my lover
Lost ...
for I share it all with you
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Dreamy..
A beautifully written, and dreamy piece.
I love how you have created this..giving the reader space to contemplate on the words.
DEbs
dreamy
Thank you! I became quite "dreamy" about it all thinking of autumn and blending the love within it.
beautiful poem carol
loved this one carol from start to finish
a truly beautiful write thanks for the read from Willow
"lost"
thank you for your input! I'm so glad you liked it!
lost/dreamy
thanks so much! I appreciate your response...it was and is still dreamy for me.
carol
just lovely!
very beautiful! your autumn imagery was striking and original. excellent!
joyce
autum
Thank you! Much appreciated, I miss the autumn so much, it prompts many writings.
Beautiful
Ahhh. beautiful autumn words.... lost among the colors . My favorite pastime !! Fine writing !
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