green leaves
Cascading foliage,
Oh, green passion for my eyes,
So fresh and vibrant!
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Cascading foliage,
Oh, green passion for my eyes,
So fresh and vibrant!
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Three way comment
ClaireJane,
I am going to comment on all three of your haikus. You get a tip of the cap from me because I know only too well just how difficult these are to write. I had one posted on here prior to wiping out everything and selfishly I thought it was pretty good. It's the only attempt I have made at writing haiku.
You have handled these well and they give off a wonderful feeling.
Your friend,
Pete
Thanking you Pete... and asking a little...
Thanks!
If you don't mind may I ask, Where have all your poems gone?
(I use to be reading poems during breaks from office with these 3 hours break and the scorching heat outside I'd rather stay inside and read something)
Your friend,
Clairejane
ClaireJane
Please read "Self-Inflicted Trip to the Woodshed" and it will explain it all to you.
Pete