SEPERATION

I'm floating on a river of lonliness.
In a boat made of shattered dreams.
There's lights to the port and starboard.
Blackness in the forward extremes.

I paddle with with an oar of desperation.
Towards some haven, a coast of relief.
There's light to the port and starboard,
it illumines the face of my grief.

I drift on the waters of melancholy.
My companion is blackest despair.
The lights to the port and starboard.
Show clearly you're no longer there.

I will wreck on a beach of barren time.
Its sand will be choking and foul.
There's lights to the port and starboard.
Vile darkness clings to my soul.

I will sleep in this sterile wasteland.
And wish it to be for all time.
There's lights to the port and starboard.
But what's light without reason or rhyme?

Good Piece

Such a good write! Somehow it's "beautifully sad", very well written with real feeling of loss and lonliness. Enjoyed reading this very much, good work!
Dave

Thank you.

Hi Dave,
Thanks for your message it gives a guy a reason to try to do better. It is a fact of life you know, that we humans seem to find our greatest inspiration when our spirits are low, although I do like to try my hand at humour now and then.
Clueless.

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