Fur!cough!(F..K Off)...prescriptions free

Who the bloody hell are you?smoking the weed and spluttering them germs off!
Don,t eat that dead stuff!no wonder your choking!and bleeding like sloths!
Listen to the sound advice of old mother nature as you cover up in another fur!
Burning your lungs with vices traded by traitors and the rich undertakers!
So pass the pipes o peace by the bags of mates amongst the highland lochs!(scots for body of water)
Encompass animal rights and decease for God,s sake!so fur!and cough!fUR!COFF!

great write

Clydeseer I enjoyed this one I used to smoke myself but gave up 12 years ago by self help with one of my poems I will post it this morning may help others I enjoyed your poem brought mwmories of the `WEED` back,glad I gave it all up,big hugs from Willow

very well written!

this had a strong message throughout....my mum gave up the fags after 25 yrs of puffin her brains out, but she soon came to her senses...I enjoyed this a lot...peace

Thanking you!

Im glad you liked.ive amended a wee bit!think it was needed?anyway,cheers,for the compliment.

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