Questions to God.

The ageless askings of all mankind,who?why?when?
my feelings are like an orphan left in a lions den.
Likened to abandonment by a rich overlord!
mighten this be tolerant if i just use a sword?
The garden of paradise that we all aspire to return.
is only fit for obeying ones the lord does,nt burn.
Paradise is full of perfection that man can only wish.
Our prize is full redemption for beleiving in myths.
The questions i ask?God himself built my head and heart.
so im basking down in bed now,pondering our parts.
Questions!questions!im sick at the echoes it causes.
mentions that may upset God and i get kicked with pauses.

Thanks for sharing

I can identify with so much in this poem...thanks for sharing. I will get to the comments you left for me in due time and I appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to read my writes. May you always find inspiration to continue writing!
Stay well, One love and God bless!

Thank you!

jonny

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