Stroke, of luck!
I trained and practiced and suffered gladly!
The prize was total domination of art!
Ha!...a shame!nature had grumbled badly!
i nearly died with my overworking heart!
So i entered university rising as a Dux!
My mind always on addicted overtime.
Blown and scattered messages get stuck!
And thine? am patiently now biding my time
There is no pain!just sunk and numb!
living inside and seeing clearly out!
Fear of the one who thinks you dumb!
blame?insane? i have no doubts!
I never kissed the blarney stone.
I swallowed it in one sooke.
never missed a beat!or owed a loan!
the dancing champion had this stroke of luck!?
9(footnote..amended!)this is about when i sufferred a stroke,it was weird!
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Another good one Clyde
I enjoyed this one hey whats a good patriotic Scotsman like you doing kissing the Blarney Stone ,Oh well we are all celts together whether it be Irish, Welsh or Sots, loved this one big hugs from Willow
thank you WILLOW
Sorry i sent this in mistake as i tried to put it in a file for later work so anyway this will do.hopefully,cheers for the comment
Two thumbs up!!!!
Great job pal
the line...
My mind always on addicted overtime.
is pure genius.
I spend so much time at Trupoets.com where I'm a designated commenter that I rarely get around to the other sites like this one.
It's a real shame. Check out TP
THANK YOU
Cheers1and coming from a great poet like YOU!means a lot!and as 4 trupoets!i got accepted then papped out for one poem that looked like i was promoting weed but it wa smeant totaly the opposite!anyway they might get back,hope so,again thank you