Time Runs Out

I watched intently
as a large bellicose garden spider
repaired its broken web.

I don’t know what destroyed it,
something too large to trap became
ensnared I supposed.

I thought to myself, why do you bother,
It’s way down in the fall and your days
are growing short.

In circuitous fashion it spun delicate orbs,
as if in desperation, seeming to sense
time running out.

I watched each strand laid down in perfect
geometric form, as it blindly followed some
innate plan.

Just at dusk, its work completed, it rested
in perceived security, and waited to be
rewarded for its labor.

Last night there was a hard freeze.

@2001

Interesting, spelling errors

Interesting, spelling errors not too bad, ending fantastic.

Spelling errors

Curtis J. Forsythe

Thank you atomsmistress1743. I would very much appreciate your pointing out the specific spelling errors. What am I missing?

"something to large to trap"...

should be "something too large to trap". Very nice poem. I agree the ending was great. That one line by itself after having set up a pattern of 3 lines really made the abruptness of it stand out. It's about life and the way things just come out of nowhere despite our best intentions?

"Something too large to trap"

Curtis J. Forsythe

Thank you Mr. Morribund. It would appear that I missed the obvious. If I live to be one-hundred I shall always have a problem with "to," and "too" also, pardon the pun. I will correct this error and check my other posts for the same goof. Also, thank you for your kind assessment of this work.

Don't feel bad

I still get "then" and "than" confused. It's not that big a deal.

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