When Childhood innocence Dies

You can see it in the eyes-
when childhood innocence dies-
walls are built-
to hide the guilt-
when childhood innocence dies.

You can hear it in the lies-
when childhood innocence dies-
first cheating-
then deceiving-
when childhood innocence dies.

It should come as no surprise-
when childhood innocence dies-
strive to keep-
but do not weep-
when childhood innocence dies.

When childhood innocence dies-
parents who are truly wise-
remove guilt-
and all walls built-
when childhood innocence dies.

Awesome

I love it! It's great that you could make it rhyme and flow so well.

Awesome

Hi Azraels_Daughter,

Thank you for your really awesome review. Happy you enjoyed it.

amazing

i dont think i've ever read something this great ..

life taught me to be strong even when im broken, weak deep inside..

amazing

Hi shadow dancer,

Thank you. I don't think I've ever received a compliment this great. I find it amazing.

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