Bloody Haiku
These bloody Haiku
Have taken me prisoner
Get out of my head!!
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excellent, dave
I know the feeling exactly, and it is very strong. Writing this kind of verse can become an obsession. Very good poem - hard to catch that much emotion in three lines! I like five better - a lot more space?!
joyce
see above
see above
Thank You
Joyce, yes I'm finding them addictive!! And the Tanka form as well!!
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,
Dave
:)
LOL...good one Dave...wish I knew how to write one ...
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Heavenoceanic, glad you liked this one. I'm sure you could write one easily enough, the first and third lines have 5 syllables and the second line has 7. Be warned, you could end up counting syllables on your fingers for a while, like me!!
I must look like a three year old learning to count sometimes!!
Thanks again for taking the time to comment, look forward to reading more of your work,
Dave
Wow
Very emotional, I wish my longer work could be like this one. Good job on this.
Kyu ~ (^^)v
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For taking the time to read and comment SoftSpokenKitsune, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Dave
No prob
Reading and writing poetry, any form, is a hobby of mine. I was glad to have read one peice that showed so much emotion
Kyu ~ (^^)v