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Love

Posted June 17th, 2008 by David Gibbs

The tender first kiss
Fluttering heartbeat quickens
Senses come alive.

dave

On June 17th, 2008 lroconnell says:

Isn't it the truth? that first kiss? i have to say anticipating the 2nd kiss is nice too...
nice write
Linda

I Agree

On June 17th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Totally! But then after the second kiss...... when things get a little more heated.... the anticipation then can be electric!!!!!
Think I'll let you write about that, your writes are erotic and sexy, I think if I tried it might just turn into a lot of smutty words!! lol!
Thanks for reading and commenting Linda,
Dave

LOL...

On June 17th, 2008 lroconnell says:

Youre funny Dave,
im sure you would write it beautifully.
i can just imagine...actually, i d like to see it happen. i always like getting a guys point of view...
anyways, you might have inspired me to write about
"the 3rd kiss"....LOL
thanks dave
Linda

Hmmm

On June 17th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Not sure about that, would most likely get me thrown off the site!! lol.
Look forward to reading yours though!! And then taking a cold shower afterwards!!!
Take Care
Dave

:)

On June 18th, 2008 heavenoceanic says:

Very nice Dave...then passion takes over mind...

- heaven

Thanks Heaven

On June 18th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Glad you enjoyed,
Dave

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