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Take me back in time she said,
To before my life began,
So I might understand she said,
What beast's inbred in man
For he can kill his own kind,
Like no other mammal can,
And he dances with the devil,
For much of his lifespan
Take me back in time she cried,
So I can change it all,
And cease the greed and jealosies,
Let man again stand tall
I tell her it's not possible,
To do the task she asks,
To travel back through years and years,
And rearrange the past
Maybe someday in the future,
It will be possible to do,
And then we'll all live perfect lives,
But I can't see it, can you?
- David Gibbs's blog
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OMG! this is a great poem! I
OMG! this is a great poem! I loved it! loved the wording and how it all made sense. some poems I read don't make any sense at all, but that's just me. wouldn't it be great if we all could go back in time to change things?
Thanks
Thanks for your comments, glad you enjoyed it. I struggle to understand some poems as well! Most of mine are pretty basic and hopefully easy reads,
Dave
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this is a very very nice poem, well done
God Bless You
Susan Jean
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Dave