Moonlight
Softly shimmering
On the satin smooth surface
Enticing beauty
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Gorgeous
Simply beautiful. raskin
Thanks Raskin
Glad you enjoyed, many thanks for commenting,
Dave
nice use of alliteration...
the "s" sound is so soft and lovely. The sound enhances your beautiful haiku. Great beauty, Dave.
joyce
Thank You Joyce
For reading and commenting, glad that you like this one, I quite like it myself!
Dave
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Very nice indeed Mr.Gibbs...
- heaven
Is This To My Dad??
Oh you mean me! Ha ha. Well I guess I've been called a lot worse!!
As we are keeping things formal, I would just like to convey my sincere gratitude to you, Miss Oceanic, for taking the time to read and comment on this piece,
Dave