Mothers Day
Here's to you on your special day,
Wish I could have shown you another way,
To all the departed and next of kin,
To all the love that's held within,
There wasn't much time for us to share,
Grandchildren, life, things of which I know you'd care.
That dreadful day you were taken from me,
The void you left for all to see,
I stood strong mum, I did my best,
But I lost them all, cuts through my chest.
I'll pour another in memory of you,
For the kindness, the love, the things you did do,
My life's moved on, different girl, different show,
You'd love her mum, that much I know.
I tell her of you and the way you were,
There's a bit of you, I see in her,
She's special mum, and I hold her dear,
Yes that's me talking, not the beer.
I can make her laugh, like I did you,
You'd have got on well, I think that's true,
Another shot and maybe a beer,
The time to leave is drawing near.
When I was young, my childhood past,
I never thought you wouldn't last,
I remember you laying in the cask,
For a better mother I couldn't ask.
I drain the bottle, it hits the bin,
She holds my hand and reels me in,
Her gorgeous eyes and tender touch,
She questions me never, she gives me so much.
You'd love her mum, as much as me,
She's brought me back love and dignity,
One more for the road and it's time to go,
We'll walk hand in hand, we'll walk real slow.
Seeya mum, but not just yet,
Came close a few times but slipped through the net,
My life at the moment is happy and fun,
Miss you, as always, love from your son.
- David Gibbs's blog
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A Really Beautiful Tribute
Dave, and i hope you dont mind me leaving a comment on this particular write.
It was a moving poem and im sure she is with you still in spirit.
I lacked the courage this year to put a tribute on for my mother, still to painful, but this meant alot to me.
Thankyou for sharing it.
Debs
Scareysquirel...
How are you, dear?
Debs
Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you found it moving, I was in two minds how to write this piece. I wanted it to have feeling but I didn't want it to be an unhappy piece. Not sure what I achieved come the end of it!! As with all memories, the more you think about someone, the more you remember and want to write down. I tried to keep it light and short, like I already said, not really sure what I achieved come the end of it.
Thanks for taking the time to read,
Dave
I agree with Scareysquirel.
A wonderful tribute. My mums still alive. 71, but doing well. She's my best friend. Couldn't ask for a better mum than she.
Wonderful piece of work. One of the best I've read.
Thank You
Thank you tj, glad you got something from this piece and happy to hear your mum is so special to you.
Dave