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Night Swim

Posted June 2nd, 2008 by David Gibbs

Tranquil and placid
Inviting coolness beckons
Ripples radiate
The moons reflection shatters
Into a million stars

Beautiful Images, Dave

On June 2nd, 2008 Scareysquirel says:

Very sensual, and inviting. A great write.

Thank You

On June 2nd, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Thank you Debs, I actually tried to use some grown up words for once!! Ha ha
Thanks for commenting,
Dave

lovely tanka, Dave

On June 2nd, 2008 joyce says:

Good, good job, Dave. You have captured the mood and the beauty. I love it!

joyce

Many Thanks Joyce

On June 3rd, 2008 David Gibbs says:

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, thank you for reading and commenting,
Dave

A nice piece

On June 3rd, 2008 andrew1 says:

Its a nice piece this Dave, I especially like the last two lines.
Andrew

Thanks Andrew

On June 4th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

I must admit I'm quite happy with the way this one turned out!
Thanks for taking time to read and comment,
Dave

dave...

On June 4th, 2008 lroconnell says:

your words are so vividly portrayed in this tanka. i can see exactly what you mean when you say 'the moons reflection "shatters" into a million stars'....i picture myself in that still water looking down at it glistening. greatttttt visual!!!!
Linda

Thank You Linda

On June 4th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

For your kind comments, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,
Dave

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