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Saved or Damned

Posted February 22nd, 2008 by David Gibbs

Skybound or deep down,
Jehovah or Lucifer,
Judgement day will tell.

A really good Write!

On February 23rd, 2008 Scareysquirel says:

Dave.
Not only Haiku, but it also has a definate rhythm to it.

Debs

Thank You

On February 23rd, 2008 David Gibbs says:

Thank you Debs, it was a surprisingly quick write as all the syllables were right with my first thoughts!! So instead of thinking about what words I could change, I left it as it was.
Thanks for reading and commenting,

Dave

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