The Fat Cat
Into my garden came
The fat cat
Onto my lawn
Where he sat
Shits on my grass
And my mat
I get my shovel
Now he's flat!!
- David Gibbs's blog
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he he he!!
this is cute!
The Fat Cat!
Very humorous! Simply crafted and straight to the point. Got a fat cat of my own - weighs a whopping 17 pounds. Fat and lazy, he is.
Scareysquirel recommended your blog - can't say I'm dissapointed. I've enjoyed reading your work.
I'm Flattered
Many thanks tj, I'm especially flattered that an accomplished writer such as Scareysquirel has recommended my work to anybody!! Thank you for commenting on this piece
Dave
My friend...
I have to ask. Curiousity has gotten the best of me. Where are you based? I'm guessing England.
You guessed!!
Yes England tj, is that a good thing or a bad thing? The land where everyone is called "mate" and we invent brilliant games like football and cricket and then show the world how completely crap we are at playing them!! Ha ha
Dave
AAh!
But we'd good at snooker!, and most pub derived sports!!
Debs :.)
Good reply, my friend.
England! That's a good thing.
It's good to laugh!
This poem reminds me of my father. He doesn't like cats or dogs going on his lawn either! He doesn't treat it quite as humorously though! Very funny piece - and it even rhymes. Thanks for the boost!
Joyce
Thank You
Thanks for commenting Joyce, glad you enjoyed this piece,
Dave